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OHSHC: Vacation Chapter 2Chapter Two: FlightThe plane began to taxi along the runway as the sign flashed on above the seats to 'fasten seatbelts'. The perspiration on Kaoru's forehead was glistening and he kept making fists with his hands whenever there was the slightest bump or nudge from the plane. Haruhi could see his chest rise and fall as he began breathing faster and faster and, as the plane speeded up, Kaoru gripped the arm rest between his and Haruhi's seats so tightly that his knuckles turned white and the tendons on his bare arm stood out. His legs were shaking and as the plane sped ever faster, he closed his eyes tightly so as not to see the runway rushing by outside.Haruhi looked over towards where Hikaru was sitting, expecting to see the more stubborn twin occupying himself with something but, to her surprise, Hikaru was staring over at his brother with what looked like a pained expression on his face. Hikaru's eyebrows were raised and he looked like someone had just stabbed him in the chest as
OHSHC: Vacation Chapter 1Chapter One: LateRING RING, RING RING."Nnn
"RING RING, RING RING."Hikaru, get the phone
""You get it.""It's your phone, you get it."Hikaru Hitachiin sighed and rolled over in the double bed he shared with his twin brother, Kaoru. The chill of the morning air brushed against his naked torso and he shivered slightly as he flipped open his cell phone,"Hello?""KAORU?!" It was Tamaki, "Where are you guys?!""Its Hikaru," the redhead mumbled groggily, still half-asleep, "We're at home."On the bed, Kaoru, who was lying on his front, turned his head to look at his brother. He squinted through sleep deprived eyes and then drifted back into sleep. Hikaru ran his fingers through his hair as he listened to Tamaki scream down the phone,"You're supposed to be at the airport!!" Hikaru scratched his head absently as Tamaki continued, "We're all waiting for you! Do you want to ruin Haruhi's first ever proper holiday?!" he sounded like he might explode and Hikaru had to hold back a