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X Men Evolution: Chapter 5Chapter 5: RainIt was a Sunday. The previous day had been non-stop training with the 'catch the flag' competition and so the rest of the weekend was a time for rest, relaxation and homework. The latter of which nobody seemed too enthusiastic about.Jean slowly dawdled down the corridor half-asleep, still in her pyjamas. She figured that if she got up fifteen minutes earlier than everyone else she'd get the bathroom all to herself. She was right. She brushed her long, red hair whilst a hovering toothbrush cleaned her teeth. Professor X's voice was suddenly in her head, making the toothbrush shoot from her mouth and hit the mirror with a splat,"Jean," the voice seemed to come from her own mind, "Storm and I are going out for the day and, as Hank's away and Logan's busy, I'm leaving you and Scott in charge.""No problem Professor," she thought back, "I'll let him know as soon as he wakes up."Jean felt the Professor leave the mansion and heard the faint shuffling sounds of the first gro
X Men Evolution: Chapter 4Chapter Four: Snatch"Okay, you've all been allocated your groups," Scott stood in front of the three small groups as he gave them their instructions, "Each group will take turns to capture that flag," he pointed towards a large hill at the side of the mansion, on top of which stood a flag pole with a piece of red fabric attached to it.Jean stood beside Scott, "The winner from each team will then compete.""Let's do this!" Logan barked as he walked to an empty spot on the lawn. His group Rogue, Jamie and Jubilee followed him."My team will go first," Scott ushered his team Kurt, Ray, Bobby and Amara to another spot on the lawn.Kurt and the rest of Scott's group sat on the grass as Scott allocated them partners,"Bobby and Amara, you two will race first. Then Kurt and Ray.""Awesome," Bobby was practically beaming.The first pair stood up and prepared to race."On your marks," Scott leant forward, "Get set. GO!"The two youngsters darted off in the directio
X Men Evolution: Chapter 3Chapter 3 WeekendScott had done it. He'd managed to go the entire week without seeing Duncan or Sean again; he'd waited behind after his lectures so that he didn't meet them in the corridors and he'd taken a packed lunch so that he didn't bump into them in the cafeteria. And now it was the weekend. A time to relax and have fun, a time to forget any worries or troubles, a time to-Scott's feet suddenly got swept from under him as Sam rocketed across the area in front of the mansion."Sam!" Scott yelled, getting to his feet, "Watch where you're going will you!"Sam turned his head to look back at Scott and, as he did so, he ploughed into a nearby oak tree, which groaned and flopped heavily on its side. The human Cannonball landed in a heap next to the ruined tree and got shakily to his feet; he stumbled around aimlessly, holding his head, as he tried to walk in a straight line.It was a Saturday, which meant one thing training. Scott, Jean and Logan (Hank was out of town f
X Men Evolution: Chapter 2Chapter 2 CollegeScott straightened his red glasses and took a deep breath before walking up the steps to the main building where he would be taking his classes. He pushed open the large wooden doors and stepped into the corridor; it was so loud. Not that he wasn't used to noise, living in the mansion was like constantly being at a football game, but everyone here seemed to be shouting at eachother."Look out dude!" A guy with long black hair zoomed past Scott on a skateboard, almost knocking him over. Scott stared after him in shock, his mouth hanging open. He walked down the corridor, narrowly dodging a few other skaters and a girl waving huge pom poms, and finally found his locker. He read the combination from a piece of paper he'd fished out of his pocket and got his books out."Hey!" A cheerful voice made Scott jump. He shut his locker and looked into the deep blue eyes of a young blonde guy, "I'm Sean Cassidy".Scott smiled and shook Sean's hand, "Scott Summers"."So, fir
X Men Evolution: Chapter 1Hi, this is my first X Men: Evolution fic so be kind Its set about three months after the final episode
enjoyChapter 1 Breakfast"Kurt!" Kitty's shrill voice bounced off the walls as she swiped the carton of milk from the fuzzy dude's blue hand."Vhat?""I was just about to like, drink that!""Ja, right from ze carton!"Kitty stuck out her tongue and reached into the cupboard for a glass. She poured the last of the milk into it and handed the empty carton back to Kurt who took it and threw it in the trash."ACHOO!" suddenly Sam shot through the kitchen like a, well, like a cannonball. He bounced off the ceiling and landed on the table in a sniffling heap, knocking Bobby's cereal onto his lap,"Hey!" shouted Bobby, mopping milk and cornflakes from his trousers."Sorry", sniffed Sam. He shuffled into a seat next to Rogue, who shifted her chair away slightly, "I can't get rid of this cold".Logan walked into the kitchen and scrunched his nose up at the smell of sour milk